Just a quick update on progress. I have re-read the review draft, marking up changes and edits in hard copy. It’s amazing how much easier and nicer it is to mark on paper than on screen! I’m now typing those changes up, and am on page 124. There are still a few sections that need further work, but I hope to at least get the edits done this weekend. The bits that need more time are sticking out because they need slightly more detailed research to set them in context. This process may take a while, but I’d like to think that the text will be as complete as I can get it within the next couple of weeks.